Artical design

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Second darfts

these are my 2nd drafts

this is my fornt cover. i am very please with
it. i did ask a few friends on what they thought
and they gave me a few thing to change for example
in the old one each line has a diffrent colour,
however my feriend suggested that it would be better
if 1 strorry was  colour. and i think that was very good.
so i tryed it and i thought it looked alot better

this is my contents page. Ibtlike that io have the same
amount of images to text. however i am not sure about
the gray background. i feel that it make the page look dull.



this is my first double page spread. i am very pleased with it. i think it
the modle links in very well to the the text. alo i like that the text has
going don like steps and fills the page. one thing i am worried about
is the backgroundi thing i can be a but too plain



this is my main double page spread. i like the lay out of it, and i think
it is good that i have used an images i have used good this is becuase 1
image is on her when she is sat down this is a mid shot. then the smaller
image ois ehen she is standing and it has been taken from a hight angle.
however i think i need to add a pull quite and need to make my text
smaller.



This is my final article I will use in my double page spread. I had to change it because the images that I have taken did not go well with the other article. So I made a new article that connect to the images very well.

Contents Page Cover Draft

this is my 1st draft of my content page. I think that i have used and  equal amount of images to text. i will need to ask my target audience what they think of this to help me improve it

Front Cover Draft

this is my 1st draft for my front cover. I think I have done as much as I could have. however I do need to ask my target audience of what they think about it, which will help me to improve it.

I Have Started on My Contents Page

Arical Draft

This is an image of my draft contents page. I will have the same font as the title. I think I will keep the same colours and same font size. I think this will make my magazine will be more recognisable for the reader. The titles will be written on one side and either large picture or lots of small pictures on the other side. At the bottom I will place the website, magazine name, date along with a few more picture. I want to add the Indian culture on to this page so I will add brush strokes behind the text (highlighted in the yellow circle below) to make it look even more Indian I will make with the colours of the Indian flag.

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